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ANNIE: "Kissing Him." |
01/11/04
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Vin/JD; Vin/Chris. ATF Universe. Vin and Chris are just tentatively beginning a relationship that involves more than friendship when, one drunken night, Vin and JD kiss. Has Vin ruined everything? |
Vin's
hair smelled a bit bitter from the
cigarette smoke from the bar...and yet smelled clean, too,
like he'd
stepped straight from his shower.... |
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And
then suddenly that brought on the image of
Vin standing there, naked as the day he was born, his
fingers massaging
into his own long, silky mane of hair and then.... |
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Jesus,
and then out of nowhere, JD found his own
hands entwined deeply into Vin's hair, twirling it around
his fingers,
and he pulled that exquisite face toward him--Vin really
was one
good-looking man, pretty almost, beautiful--and he smiled
as those
pale, full lips descended down to his and oh, God, he
wanted to feel
that hair brush against his face.... |
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Who
was kissing who here? |
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A
pair of hands gently, though firmly, framed his
face and the softest of lips descended onto his. |
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Oh
Jesus, Vin's lips. |
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Oh, Jesus...he was kissing Vin! | |
I like
Annie's writing very
much: it's intelligent and full of
character
and kept me reading to see what happened next. I
like the
intensity of feeling in this story and I like the way the
character's
react to "the kiss", even JD's rather homophobic response,
which I
found pretty realistic. |
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DELPHI: "Something." | |
01/11/04
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Vin/Ezra. Vin contemplates the exact nature of his relationship with Ezra. |
The town-folk don't know him, not in the way that Chris used to and Ezra's starting to. That he used to be one of the "Magnificent Seven" is always good for a free drink with those young men who arrived somewhere between the facts and stories. For some reason, a group of drinking men are more likely to expect a tall tale of gunfights from him than from Ezra. Ez don't talk much about those days, which always amazes Chris. But Vin thinks he gets it. Those days are fading fast, and it cheapens them to their dime-store novels to cart 'em out for a bunch of family men who'll never understand. | |
This
is a nice little slice of life snippet set in the future
sometime, when
Four Corners has grown into a busy town and only Vin,
Chris and Ezra
remain of the original 'Magnificent Seven'. There's
a pleasing
sense of realism in this story -- no overblown romanticism
here, just
an interesting look at one possible future. |
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HILL, CHARLOTTE: "No Love For Solitude." No link |
01/03/04
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Buck/JD;
Buck/Chris (implied). Buck is accosted by his old lover Chris, and accused of corrupting his new lover, JD. |
"You came here to tell me not to take some comfort with that boy. You came here to tell me my business when you washed your hands of it and me a long time ago." He deflated suddenly, tired of the fighting, tired beyond his years. "I missed that friendship, Chris. Then you roused me out of a warm bed and brought me in for that Injun thing." He laughed, the sound soft and fragile to his ears. "I'll tell ya, pard, I'm grateful you're doin' better. I'm glad for you, that the past is enough the past that you c'n maybe start livin' again, a little. But Chris..." the feel of water on his cheeks startled him and he ducked his head, swiping at the tears. "Don't begrudge me some comfort." | |
This
is a lovely story and a very well done character
study. This is
not a happy story, but I don't believe it's a sad one
either.
Extremely well done. |
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KILLASHANDRA: "The Street." No Link |
01/03/04
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Gen. An unknown member of the Magnificent Seven watches the town and ponders what life has become. Then he sees Vin and Chris walking along the street together. |
It has always been a temporary thing, and he knows that. They've known from the start, of course -- all save young Mr. Dunne, perhaps, who is still young enough to believe that Indian Summer will never end. But the rest have always known that the day would come when the town would outgrow the seven of them, when they'd be replaced by real lawmen, with real badges, and all the trappings of a civilized municipality. | |
This
story
is very short but
very evocative. |
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ZORROROJO: "One Day Out West." | |
01/11/04
934kb |
Chris/Vin. CROSSOVER with Stargate. The Magnificent Seven are kidnapped in the middle of a deadly gunfight by a rogue Asgard to be held in stasis as a living "work of art" - and are rescued over 100 years later and returned to Earth. The Stargate team have the unenviable job of breakig the news to the guys and trying to find a new place for them in the modern world. |
The
last group was a group of three and they were behind the
better cover
of some boulders, but they were firing at a position
behind them. The
men looked trapped and were probably making a last stand. |
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Dr.
Daniel Jackson moved closer to the forcefield, closer to
the
group of four trying to find cover for their exposed
bodies. All but
one. |
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One
man, dressed in black from head to toe, brandishing six
shooters, wearing a silver rig and spurs on his boots,
this man used
his body to shield a man on the ground. |
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The
one on the ground was a ghastly grey color - a color human
skin only took on when there wasn't much blood left in the
body. His
eyes were open, staring into the eyes of the man shielding
him, their
arms clasped at the forearm. |
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A bullet, frozen in the air, was two feet from completing it's course - ominously pointing straight at the man in black's head. | |
This
story is HUGE but fascinating. I really enjoyed the
way the
author dealt with the cultural shock encountered by both
the cowboys
and the Stargate crew. The emphasis is definitely on
the
Magnificent Seven side of the crossover, especially Chris
and Vin, with
Jack and Daniel the only Stargate characters to get any
sort of real
role in the story. The story is told from mostly frm
Chris' pov,
a Chris that idolises Vin to the exclusion of everything
else and this
focus is reflected in the concerns of the story -- so if
you're not
into Vin, you might find this idealisation of him a little
tough.
However, this story is a wonderful read: intelligent,
interesting, and
thought-provoking. |
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